Week 5 - Changes to Animatic

After the presentation of my work this week, I have gained further feedback towards my animatic. From this I have now utilised this feedback to create, what should hopefully be, my final version of the animatic. Most of the feedback was about the length and pacing of the piece. Running at over five minutes, my animatic was far too long, but after trimming the shots within it, it is now just over four and a half minutes long. This shorter running time is certainly for the better, and helps keep the frantic tone I was hoping for within the film. My animatic is displayed below.